Tuesday, February 19, 2008

deconstruct billshakes

That gentle frame, the lovely gaze:
every eye will play
the very same unfair
which leads to hideous frost
everywhere,
left a prisoner in walls
of beauty remembrance--
what it was.
Distilled, they meet,
their substance still lives.

2 comments:

runnerfrog said...

This is so beautiful and deep that I had to say it.

BP said...

its a deconstruction of a shakespeare sonnet,
picking one or two words per line and making something altogether new